新时代摄影 阜新市老年人大学学员优秀摄影作品展

原句：

"The sun was setting, casting a golden glow over the city. People hurried home from work, their faces tired but content. The streets were alive with the sounds of evening traffic and the aroma of street food filled the air."

改写润色后：

"As the sun dipped below the horizon, it painted the cityscape in a warm, golden hue. The workforce, their expressions a mix of fatigue and satisfaction, hastened towards their abodes. The thoroughfares buzzed with the cacophony of the evening commute, while the enticing fragrance of roadside delicacies permeated the atmosphere."

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